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 ===Health===
-The main health issue among Anøvrians (like in many Etalocian and Cualuavian nations) is considered to be the suicide rate. Traditionally Etalocian culture was very harsh on failures or nonconformity, even though it espoused nonviolence.
+The main health issue among Anøvrians (like in many Etalocian and Cualuavian nations) is considered to be the suicide rate. Traditional Etalocian culture is quite harsh on failure or nonconformity, even though it espoused nonviolence.
 ===Urbanization===