Verse:Hmøøh/Yocneam: Difference between revisions

@@ Line 11: / Line 11: @@
 ==Lyrics==
-Each line has 11 syllables
+Anapaestic tetrameter?
 <poem>
 Verse 1:
-_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,
-_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.
-_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,
-_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _.
 Final verse:
-''... fnga,''
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ fnga,
-''... hima.''
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ hima.
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,
+_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _!
 </poem>