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[I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss, then mapped it into Hwnic.]

Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v ~~uqcari~~ ivar lne

Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v uqcari² ivar lne

ust odn ltnecone e delnucifexuu vcti ltmer

Fdnireq b launt nr xanemedls xoqor

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trcarn ldud nr jelnrkn gusifdem b icadcti ndogu

Suitti quriscererpe nr ersnt tifevtir

Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn ~~xastipn[2]~~

Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn xastipn³

Siqlaxhertilcfe ge tini gusxadirmir snter

qasl u eidasene zamaqn mapintokbasne t luem

Desem patnui u eidapotef asined

Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu ~~bim~~

Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu bim¹

~~indef.~~ spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. ~~complex_web~~-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT

spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT

-

and city late_autumn DAT storm-winter-first appos.-to_be await.3N

cross-section GEN water-opaque LOC suspending-headspace hang.3N

REL wheels-neon ACC trend ride.PRES.IPFV (appos.) downturn economy

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A spider endlessly spins a fractalic web

in the ?? late-autumn ~~warmth waiting for~~ the first winter storm.

in the late-autumn city that awaits the first winter storm.

The cross-section of ?? water hang above;

The cross-section of cloudy water hang above;

here I ~~[together~~ with many others], on wheels of neon~~, ride~~ the trend of economic downturn

here I, with many others, ride on wheels of neon the trend of economic downturn

clutching an electron gun to make a diffraction of someone's face.

Against the sky where birds rot away mid-flight,

we used to dine at the end of the waves, inside walls of fused blades.

Before that it [this place] was a painted-over gate where a homeless man spent his days and nights,

and before that relaxed ~~eateries~~ [I remember] from my childhood, but ~~once they closed~~ the city ~~forgot about~~ them.

and before that relaxed diners [I remember] from my childhood, but the city has since forgotten them.

~~All~~ the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point ~~now~~ in the plastic arena;

Now all the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point in the plastic arena.

~~under the old sun,~~ pain has no significance outside the brain.

Nobody will answer cries for help; here pain has no significance outside the brain.

As easy music drowns out the dying wailing around me,

I shut my ~~mass-produced~~ eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.

I shut my eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.

~~[1]~~ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.

¹ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.

~~[2] The~~ electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations

² An electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations

³ When these relaxed diners I mention here still existed, the PST.PFV form of Hwnic verbs was to suffix -''pn'', part of a deprecated system now superseded with auxiliary verbs.

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== Notes ==

* Pronunciation is an obstacle, as always:

* ''Fractlcilinu v uqcari'' is [fr&ct@lc5IlInu2 7v(j){ELISION}uq(nar)carI], recall that the apposition particle ''v'' is palatalized.

* ''trcarn ldud'' is [t4caa(~)Rl(~)du2D].

* uqcari is ''uq''- "of the mind" and -''cari'' "network", contraction of ''carsapi''.

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 [I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss, then mapped it into Hwnic.]
-Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v uqcari ivar lne
+Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v uqcari² ivar lne
 ust odn ltnecone e delnucifexuu vcti ltmer
 Fdnireq b launt nr xanemedls xoqor
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 trcarn ldud nr jelnrkn gusifdem b icadcti ndogu
 Suitti quriscererpe nr ersnt tifevtir
-Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn xastipn[2]
+Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn xastipn³
 Siqlaxhertilcfe ge tini gusxadirmir snter
 qasl u eidasene zamaqn mapintokbasne t luem
 Desem patnui u eidapotef asined
-Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu bim
+Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu bim¹
-indef. spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. complex_web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT
+spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT
--
+and city late_autumn DAT storm-winter-first appos.-to_be await.3N
 cross-section GEN water-opaque LOC suspending-headspace hang.3N
 REL wheels-neon ACC trend ride.PRES.IPFV (appos.) downturn economy
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 A spider endlessly spins a fractalic web
-in the ?? late-autumn warmth waiting for the first winter storm.
+in the late-autumn city that awaits the first winter storm.
-The cross-section of ?? water hang above;
+The cross-section of cloudy water hang above;
-here I [together with many others], on wheels of neon, ride the trend of economic downturn
+here I, with many others, ride on wheels of neon the trend of economic downturn
 clutching an electron gun to make a diffraction of someone's face.
 Against the sky where birds rot away mid-flight,
 we used to dine at the end of the waves, inside walls of fused blades.
 Before that it [this place] was a painted-over gate where a homeless man spent his days and nights,
-and before that relaxed eateries [I remember] from my childhood, but once they closed the city forgot about them.
+and before that relaxed diners [I remember] from my childhood, but the city has since forgotten them.
-All the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point now in the plastic arena;
+Now all the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point in the plastic arena.
-under the old sun, pain has no significance outside the brain.
+Nobody will answer cries for help; here pain has no significance outside the brain.
 As easy music drowns out the dying wailing around me,
-I shut my mass-produced eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.
+I shut my eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.
-[1] I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.
+¹ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.
-[2] The electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations
+² An electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations
+³ When these relaxed diners I mention here still existed, the PST.PFV form of Hwnic verbs was to suffix -''pn'', part of a deprecated system now superseded with auxiliary verbs.
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+== Notes ==
+* Pronunciation is an obstacle, as always:
+* ''Fractlcilinu v uqcari'' is [fr&ct@lc5IlInu2 7v(j){ELISION}uq(nar)carI], recall that the apposition particle ''v'' is palatalized.
+* ''trcarn ldud'' is [t4caa(~)Rl(~)du2D].
+* uqcari is ''uq''- "of the mind" and -''cari'' "network", contraction of ''carsapi''.