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{{Hwnic text

~~|title=Testing~~

|hwnic=Mormez lsvo islojunujunujunujunu

|hwnic=~~Abnd aboqn asdad amel asdop~~

Casrumtag lsvi rit omi ti mvinos v bdoz xadndu nr xanxadunozor

~~bateu borosu u boro biqnfnd~~

Gidmxav fone cist u Gloss ge cezin razav kyzon

cist ~~cyi carsapi cozod~~

|en=Detect the long long long long line

~~xubem dnsmib data dinu~~

I found something interesting: the eye can read static text that overlaps moving text.

|en=~~The beginning~~ line ~~awards the services flamboyantly.~~

Try viewing this page on [your] phone and scrolling the gloss around.

~~The ridiculous line segment annoys~~ the ~~prose~~.

|gloss=detect.3I PST.PFV line-long-long-long-long

~~Then the programmed quietude knew:~~

interest-observe.1Sg PRES.PFV this [def.] eye REL ability appos. read.3N text-static LOC top_layer-text-move-PARTI

this is the ~~local data exit~~.

this-look.2Sg [REL] phone then ACC gloss MOT surroundings scroll.2Sg VOLUN.FUT}}

|gloss=~~beginning text_line award~~.~~3N service conspicuous~~.Z

~~line_segment ridiculous ACC prose noise~~-~~make~~.3N

then ~~quietude program know~~.3N

~~(quote) exit data local~~

}}

== Glossing and translation ==

<pre>

[I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss. Hwnic ~~text will be added shortly~~.]

[I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss, then mapped it into Hwnic.]

~~indef.~~ spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. ~~complex_web~~-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT

Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v uqcari² ivar lne

-

ust odn ltnecone e delnucifexuu vcti ltmer

Fdnireq b launt nr xanemedls xoqor

ti Oratnion u cnadil poveil farig lne v geulbiz

alaindup ti pimut afadosebrfn ivndizmuc

Opmbo niva ceimautrlimac sngescuer

trcarn ldud nr jelnrkn gusifdem b icadcti ndogu

Suitti quriscererpe nr ersnt tifevtir

Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn xastipn³

Siqlaxhertilcfe ge tini gusxadirmir snter

qasl u eidasene zamaqn mapintokbasne t luem

Desem patnui u eidapotef asined

Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu bim¹

spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT

and city late_autumn DAT storm-winter-first appos.-to_be await.3N

cross-section GEN water-opaque LOC suspending-headspace hang.3N

REL wheels-neon ACC trend ride.PRES.IPFV (appos.) downturn economy

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A spider endlessly spins a fractalic web

in the ?? late-autumn ~~warmth waiting for~~ the first winter storm.

in the late-autumn city that awaits the first winter storm.

The cross-section of ?? water hang above;

The cross-section of cloudy water hang above;

here I ~~[together~~ with many others], on wheels of neon~~, ride~~ the trend of economic downturn

here I, with many others, ride on wheels of neon the trend of economic downturn

clutching an electron gun to make a diffraction of someone's face.

Against the sky where birds rot away mid-flight,

we used to dine at the end of the waves, inside walls of fused blades.

Before that it [this place] was a painted-over gate where a homeless man spent his days and nights,

and before that relaxed ~~eateries~~ [I remember] from my childhood, but ~~once they closed~~ the city ~~forgot about~~ them.

and before that relaxed diners [I remember] from my childhood, but the city has since forgotten them.

~~All~~ the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point ~~now~~ in the plastic arena;

Now all the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point in the plastic arena.

~~under the old sun,~~ pain has no significance outside the brain.

Nobody will answer cries for help; here pain has no significance outside the brain.

As easy music drowns out the dying wailing around me,

I shut my ~~mass-produced~~ eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.

I shut my eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.

~~[1]~~ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.

¹ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.

~~[2] The~~ electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations

² An electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations

³ When these relaxed diners I mention here still existed, the PST.PFV form of Hwnic verbs was to suffix -''pn'', part of a deprecated system now superseded with auxiliary verbs.

</pre>

== Notes ==

* Pronunciation is an obstacle, as always:

* ''Fractlcilinu v uqcari'' is [fr&ct@lc5IlInu2 7v(j){ELISION}uq(nar)carI], recall that the apposition particle ''v'' is palatalized.

* ''trcarn ldud'' is [t4caa(~)Rl(~)du2D].

* uqcari is ''uq''- "of the mind" and -''cari'' "network", contraction of ''carsapi''.

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 {{Hwnic text
-|title=Testing
+|hwnic=Mormez lsvo islojunujunujunujunu
-|hwnic=Abnd aboqn asdad amel asdop
+Casrumtag lsvi rit omi ti mvinos v bdoz xadndu nr xanxadunozor
-bateu borosu u boro biqnfnd
+Gidmxav fone cist u Gloss ge cezin razav kyzon
-cist cyi carsapi cozod
+|en=Detect the long long long long line
-xubem dnsmib data dinu
+I found something interesting: the eye can read static text that overlaps moving text.
-|en=The beginning line awards the services flamboyantly.
+Try viewing this page on [your] phone and scrolling the gloss around.
-The ridiculous line segment annoys the prose.
+|gloss=detect.3I PST.PFV line-long-long-long-long
-Then the programmed quietude knew:
+interest-observe.1Sg PRES.PFV this [def.] eye REL ability appos. read.3N text-static LOC top_layer-text-move-PARTI
-this is the local data exit.
+this-look.2Sg [REL] phone then ACC gloss MOT surroundings scroll.2Sg VOLUN.FUT}}
-|gloss=beginning text_line award.3N service conspicuous.Z
-line_segment ridiculous ACC prose noise-make.3N
-then quietude program know.3N
-(quote) exit data local
-}}
 == Glossing and translation ==
 <pre>
-[I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss. Hwnic text will be added shortly.]
+[I wrote this text in the interlinear gloss, then mapped it into Hwnic.]
-indef. spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. complex_web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT
+Cmaz u Fractlcilinu v uqcari² ivar lne
--
+ust odn ltnecone e delnucifexuu vcti ltmer
+Fdnireq b launt nr xanemedls xoqor
+ti Oratnion u cnadil poveil farig lne v geulbiz
+alaindup ti pimut afadosebrfn ivndizmuc
+Opmbo niva ceimautrlimac sngescuer
+trcarn ldud nr jelnrkn gusifdem b icadcti ndogu
+Suitti quriscererpe nr ersnt tifevtir
+Suitta ti sojitifobaenli micam cl odn xastipn³
+Siqlaxhertilcfe ge tini gusxadirmir snter
+qasl u eidasene zamaqn mapintokbasne t luem
+Desem patnui u eidapotef asined
+Mxacolg cist dlxng lsvo v xa vu bim¹
+spider ACC fractal-translucent appos. web-infinite spin.3N PRES.CONT
+and city late_autumn DAT storm-winter-first appos.-to_be await.3N
 cross-section GEN water-opaque LOC suspending-headspace hang.3N
 REL wheels-neon ACC trend ride.PRES.IPFV (appos.) downturn economy
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 A spider endlessly spins a fractalic web
-in the ?? late-autumn warmth waiting for the first winter storm.
+in the late-autumn city that awaits the first winter storm.
-The cross-section of ?? water hang above;
+The cross-section of cloudy water hang above;
-here I [together with many others], on wheels of neon, ride the trend of economic downturn
+here I, with many others, ride on wheels of neon the trend of economic downturn
 clutching an electron gun to make a diffraction of someone's face.
 Against the sky where birds rot away mid-flight,
 we used to dine at the end of the waves, inside walls of fused blades.
 Before that it [this place] was a painted-over gate where a homeless man spent his days and nights,
-and before that relaxed eateries [I remember] from my childhood, but once they closed the city forgot about them.
+and before that relaxed diners [I remember] from my childhood, but the city has since forgotten them.
-All the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point now in the plastic arena;
+Now all the fervent surveillence cameras turn to one point in the plastic arena.
-under the old sun, pain has no significance outside the brain.
+Nobody will answer cries for help; here pain has no significance outside the brain.
 As easy music drowns out the dying wailing around me,
-I shut my mass-produced eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.
+I shut my eyes and connect the dots: one, two, three.
-[1] I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.
+¹ I wrote this text to show how a language designed to be precise can be made blurry. I think (and hope) I don't have the ability to predict the future.
-[2] The electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations
+² An electron emitter used in diffraction demonstrations
+³ When these relaxed diners I mention here still existed, the PST.PFV form of Hwnic verbs was to suffix -''pn'', part of a deprecated system now superseded with auxiliary verbs.
 </pre>
+== Notes ==
+* Pronunciation is an obstacle, as always:
+* ''Fractlcilinu v uqcari'' is [fr&ct@lc5IlInu2 7v(j){ELISION}uq(nar)carI], recall that the apposition particle ''v'' is palatalized.
+* ''trcarn ldud'' is [t4caa(~)Rl(~)du2D].
+* uqcari is ''uq''- "of the mind" and -''cari'' "network", contraction of ''carsapi''.