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|title=E Ri b Cellax
I don't really know how to write; one thing I do with Hwnic is to describe how unique emotions are stored/processed in my mind.
|hwnic=Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
 
Qs nerl xulmbohertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
== ''E Ri b Cellax'' ==
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Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
rkngesonr ln z delncnar
rkngesonr ln z delncti
Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²
Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²
elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹
Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹
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|en=The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
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The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).
Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).
In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,
In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,
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But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.
But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.
Go, and live the way you will.
Go, and live the way you will.
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|gloss=wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
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* [¹] A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.
* [²] Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.
 
== Glossing ==
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Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
Qs nerl xulmbo-ertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
rkngesonr ln z delncnar
place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci
nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
Iza cist ramiv kylnu
go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
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|notes=¹ A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.
² Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.
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== Notes ==
== Notes ==
* Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].
* Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].
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wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
</pre>-->