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'''Ducuz kuruz accīskur'''

:Ducuz kuruz hrelunca, apu lūmí the nogū.

:{{cardosmall|Ducuz kuruz hrelunca, apu lūmí the nogū.}}

:Caru inú naskut jaculac, apu inú the ōcoskum safāc.

:{{cardosmall|Caru inú naskut jaculac, apu inú the ōcoskum safāc.}}

:Caru kwōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.

:{{cardosmall|Caru kwōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}

:Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur thasa ducīz nagaz bruntar ku thinnuc, un as gūnac rokkuntar...

:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur thasa ducīz nagaz bruntar ku thinnuc, un as gūnac rokkuntar...}}

Lang: Warthuz

22 de Agosto de 2005

== Attempted translation ==

Since the document and conlang are from so long ago, I had some travel reconstructing what was intended. This was my best attempt at a translation:

'''My heart is drowning'''

:{{cardosmall|My heart weeps, and I do not know the reason.}}

:{{cardosmall|I want to see you always, and never abandon you.}}

:{{cardosmall|I want to be with you, even after the death of the Sun and the Moon.}}

:{{cardosmall|Even after my death, even when our souls shine from heaven, or burn in the abyss…}}

== Normalization of c/k/q? ==

Further I don't know whether or not to normalize the spelling so as not to have c, k, kw. I'm thinking of one of two versions:

'''1) Version k → c / kw → q'''

:{{cardosmall|Ducuz curuz hrelunca, apu lūmí þe nogū.}}

:{{cardosmall|Caru inú nascut jaculac, apu inú þe ōcoscum safāc.}}

:{{cardosmall|Caru qōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}

:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur þasa ducīz nagaz bruntar cu þinnuc, un as gūnac roccuntar…}}

'''2) Version k → q / kw → q'''

:{{cardosmall|Ducuz quruz hrelunca, apu lūmí þe nogū.}}

:{{cardosmall|Caru inú nasqut jaculac, apu inú þe ōcosqum safāc.}}

:{{cardosmall|Caru qōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}

:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur þasa ducīz nagaz bruntar qu þinnuc, un as gūnac roqquntar…}}

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 '''Ducuz kuruz accīskur'''
-:Ducuz kuruz hrelunca, apu lūmí the nogū.
+:{{cardosmall|Ducuz kuruz hrelunca, apu lūmí the nogū.}}
-:Caru inú naskut jaculac, apu inú the ōcoskum safāc.
+:{{cardosmall|Caru inú naskut jaculac, apu inú the ōcoskum safāc.}}
-:Caru kwōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.
+:{{cardosmall|Caru kwōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}
-:Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur thasa ducīz nagaz bruntar ku thinnuc, un as gūnac rokkuntar...
+:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur thasa ducīz nagaz bruntar ku thinnuc, un as gūnac rokkuntar...}}
 Lang: Warthuz
 de Agosto de 2005
+== Attempted translation ==
+Since the document and conlang are from so long ago, I had some travel reconstructing what was intended. This was my best attempt at a translation:
+'''My heart is drowning'''
+:{{cardosmall|My heart weeps, and I do not know the reason.}}
+:{{cardosmall|I want to see you always, and never abandon you.}}
+:{{cardosmall|I want to be with you, even after the death of the Sun and the Moon.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Even after my death, even when our souls shine from heaven, or burn in the abyss…}}
+== Normalization of c/k/q? ==
+Further I don't know whether or not to normalize the spelling so as not to have c, k, kw. I'm thinking of one of two versions:
+'''1) Version k → c / kw → q'''
+:{{cardosmall|Ducuz curuz hrelunca, apu lūmí þe nogū.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Caru inú nascut jaculac, apu inú þe ōcoscum safāc.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Caru qōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur þasa ducīz nagaz bruntar cu þinnuc, un as gūnac roccuntar…}}
+'''2) Version k → q / kw → q'''
+:{{cardosmall|Ducuz quruz hrelunca, apu lūmí þe nogū.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Caru inú nasqut jaculac, apu inú þe ōcosqum safāc.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Caru qōnut tūcinōn, ewur uvarīc hīllut Nerut Ragatwa.}}
+:{{cardosmall|Ewur uvarīc ducut hīllut, ewur þasa ducīz nagaz bruntar qu þinnuc, un as gūnac roqquntar…}}