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== The Raven ==

Iambic octameter

==Nicene Creed, 325 AD (''fi Binhithma Tsiyec Nicea'') ==

From the official materials of the Bjeheondian Catholic Church (in [[Verse:Irta/Crackfic|Crackfic Tricin]]):

<poem>

~~thof ăcreng = guppy~~

''Bang tsăyec łof Grath doan — fi Ep mo fnga tsor, foang chea tătathbur tsor mo hatnguay te tsor mo dihatnguay,''

~~triem băr'i = rhinoceros~~ -- ~~a neologism from brey~~ '~~horn~~' ~~and cră~~'i '~~nose~~'

1PL.IN believe on-DEF god one — DEF father REL can all, NOMZ_REL PST create all REL PASS-see and all REL NEG-PASS-see

~~thăreng = net~~

''te łof Pĭlsüe Yeașua'a Christos doan, fi Rith Grath, fi Rith rădoan faf In Ep, iror fi swoch moang fi Ep,''

~~ăcărłüth = colorful~~

and on-DEF master Jesus Christ one, DEF son god, DEF son only from-DEF 3SG.M.POSS father, owner_of DEF essence REL DEF father

~~binngistoach = network (of people)~~

''[fi Rith moat] Grath [mo hăgep] fa Grath [fi Ep], chwäp fa chwäp, Grath finaw fa Grath finaw, ănărșeal te die pa'ieng, In swoch mot thed fi swoch yaf Ep;''

~~thăreng tsor sngeaf = WWW~~

[DEF son COP] god [REL emerge] from god [DEF father], light from light, god truth from god truth, begotten and not PAT-make, 3SG.M.POSS self same DEF self with-DEF father

fi ~~sapleach hem ămuch scie = the glory of a sky full of stars~~

''Ien moat foang chea to'ieng tsor wang, wăha imwang mif wăhäm te wăha imwang mif tăle;''

~~sapleach = glory~~

3SG.M COP NOMZ_REL PST to_fashion all thing, yea PL-thing LOC-DEF heaven and yea PL-thing LOC-DEF earth

~~pleach = glorious~~

''rüe sochie bang, Ien chea psuy drel fa impngar, te chea răhüp fteach, te chea ha'ieng croth;''

give save 1PL.IN, 3SG.M PST descend hither from DEF-height, and PST wear body, and PST PASS-make man

~~"As the days wander on~~, ~~and summer turns to winter~~,

''chea răchta, te chea ithris ftsüen łăduy mifi fnüd histiw, te chea ithris seaf imwăhäm;''

~~And hopes vanish~~, a light ~~shines far away~~.

PST die, and PST rise live again LOC-DEF day ORD-three, and PST rise thither PL-sky

~~Though Fortune~~'s ~~wheel turns~~, ~~oblivious~~ to ~~our struggles~~,

''te Ien per psuy drel te rüe łin rüe foang ftsüen te foang łoy;''

~~we skillful beings work hard~~, ~~seeking the light of day."~~

and 3SG.M FUT descend and give judgement give NOM_REL live and NOM_REL dead

''te łof Șăgor Ăthem;''

~~Sreng fi imfnüd căwdul~~, ~~teng se doach lieth șas srel~~,

and on-DEF spirit holy

~~Teng se imhălruat ngăfongits~~, ~~se chnet răfang mi yem~~.

''te łof soangew binłămduy doan seaf fi binrithwoł frăcing;''

~~Yang fi loc Imdămath rinoat~~, ~~șicleap yaf imbinmăcuath bang~~,

and on-DEF dipping NOMZ-repent thither DEF NOMZ-forgive sin

~~Bang imcroth yăsnar tăchemnüth~~, ~~mi sngom se chnet~~ fnüd.

''te łof Ăcles Yălămtsor Ăthem doan;''

or

and on-DEF church universal holy one

~~Sre căwdul ef imfnüd~~, te ~~lieth es doach șas srel~~,

''te łof bin'ithris ftsüen moang fi fteach;''

~~Te ngăfongits es imhălruat~~, ~~se chnet răfang mi yem.~~

and on-DEF NOMZ-rise life REL DEF body

~~Ya rinoat ef loc Imdămath, șicleap yaf imbinmăcuath bang,~~

''te łof săftsüen drel sloc imsngeaf.''

~~Bang imcroth yăsnar tăchemnüth, mi sngom se chnet fnüd~~.

and on-DEF life thither edge DEF-world

~~both are correct~~

~~lea (preposed) = interrogative particle~~

~~Lea mot sed~~ fi ~~ngăsoach peth moangăf imbrits Talma? = Is this the old group for Talman languages?~~

~~sre = "while" but it takes VSO~~

~~sre căwdul ef imfnüd~~

~~for SVO use sreng:~~

~~sreng~~ fi ~~imfnüd căwdul~~

~~the subject of a VSO clause is always marked with "e" (note: "e se" becomes "es"~~ and ~~"e fi" becomes "ef")~~

~~the grammar is like hlou but with preverbal tense/aspect/mood particles instead of sentence final ones~~

</poem>

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+== The Raven ==
+Iambic octameter
+==Nicene Creed, 325 AD (''fi Binhithma Tsiyec Nicea'') ==
+From the official materials of the Bjeheondian Catholic Church (in [[Verse:Irta/Crackfic|Crackfic Tricin]]):
 <poem>
-thof ăcreng = guppy
+''Bang tsăyec łof Grath doan — fi Ep mo fnga tsor, foang chea tătathbur tsor mo hatnguay te tsor mo dihatnguay,''
-triem băr'i = rhinoceros -- a neologism from brey 'horn' and cră'i 'nose'
+PL.IN believe on-DEF god one — DEF father REL can all, NOMZ_REL PST create all REL PASS-see and all REL NEG-PASS-see
-thăreng = net
+''te łof Pĭlsüe Yeașua'a Christos doan, fi Rith Grath, fi Rith rădoan faf In Ep, iror fi swoch moang fi Ep,''
-ăcărłüth = colorful
+and on-DEF master Jesus Christ one, DEF son god, DEF son only from-DEF 3SG.M.POSS father, owner_of DEF essence REL DEF father
-binngistoach = network (of people)
+''[fi Rith moat] Grath [mo hăgep] fa Grath [fi Ep], chwäp fa chwäp, Grath finaw fa Grath finaw, ănărșeal te die pa'ieng, In swoch mot thed fi swoch yaf Ep;''
-thăreng tsor sngeaf = WWW
+[DEF son COP] god [REL emerge] from god [DEF father], light from light, god truth from god truth, begotten and not PAT-make, 3SG.M.POSS self same DEF self with-DEF father<!-- ousia (translated as swoch) is the thing there's one of, hypostasis is the thing there's three of-->
-fi sapleach hem ămuch scie = the glory of a sky full of stars
+''Ien moat foang chea to'ieng tsor wang, wăha imwang mif wăhäm te wăha imwang mif tăle;''
-sapleach = glory
+SG.M COP NOMZ_REL PST to_fashion all thing, yea PL-thing LOC-DEF heaven and yea PL-thing LOC-DEF earth
-pleach = glorious
+''rüe sochie bang, Ien chea psuy drel fa impngar, te chea răhüp fteach, te chea ha'ieng croth;''
+give save 1PL.IN, 3SG.M PST descend hither from DEF-height, and PST wear body, and PST PASS-make man
-"As the days wander on, and summer turns to winter,
+''chea răchta, te chea ithris ftsüen łăduy mifi fnüd histiw, te chea ithris seaf imwăhäm;''
-And hopes vanish, a light shines far away.
+PST die, and PST rise live again LOC-DEF day ORD-three, and PST rise thither PL-sky
-Though Fortune's wheel turns, oblivious to our struggles,
+''te Ien per psuy drel te rüe łin rüe foang ftsüen te foang łoy;''
-we skillful beings work hard, seeking the light of day."
+and 3SG.M FUT descend and give judgement give NOM_REL live and NOM_REL dead
+''te łof Șăgor Ăthem;''
-Sreng fi imfnüd căwdul, teng se doach lieth șas srel,
+and on-DEF spirit holy
-Teng se imhălruat ngăfongits, se chnet răfang mi yem.
+''te łof soangew binłămduy doan seaf fi binrithwoł frăcing;''
-Yang fi loc Imdămath rinoat, șicleap yaf imbinmăcuath bang,
+and on-DEF dipping NOMZ-repent thither DEF NOMZ-forgive sin
-Bang imcroth yăsnar tăchemnüth, mi sngom se chnet fnüd.
+''te łof Ăcles Yălămtsor Ăthem doan;''
-or
+and on-DEF church universal holy one
-Sre căwdul ef imfnüd, te lieth es doach șas srel,
+''te łof bin'ithris ftsüen moang fi fteach;''
-Te ngăfongits es imhălruat, se chnet răfang mi yem.
+and on-DEF NOMZ-rise life REL DEF body
-Ya rinoat ef loc Imdămath, șicleap yaf imbinmăcuath bang,
+''te łof săftsüen drel sloc imsngeaf.''
-Bang imcroth yăsnar tăchemnüth, mi sngom se chnet fnüd.
+and on-DEF life thither edge DEF-world
-both are correct
-lea (preposed) = interrogative particle
-Lea mot sed fi ngăsoach peth moangăf imbrits Talma? = Is this the old group for Talman languages?
-sre = "while" but it takes VSO
-sre căwdul ef imfnüd
-for SVO use sreng:
-sreng fi imfnüd căwdul
-the subject of a VSO clause is always marked with "e" (note: "e se" becomes "es" and "e fi" becomes "ef")
-the grammar is like hlou but with preverbal tense/aspect/mood particles instead of sentence final ones
 </poem>