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{{Hwnic text

~~|text=This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; ''e'' "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ''ti'' "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".~~

|title=E Ri b Cellax

~~Numbered superscripts are relevant to the intended meaning of the~~ text ~~and notes in the notes section are relevant to grammar.~~

|hwnic=Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor

|~~type~~=~~notice~~

Qs nerl xulmbohertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei

|~~image=~~

nr jemuqrotacne zifqor

}}

A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write, but I feel I should save these unique emotions somewhere.

~~''Todo: complete glossing; IPA symbols; add a isloxvn image; add a flexbox fmtt;''~~

~~== Hwnic =~~=

~~<pre>~~

Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor

Qs nerl ~~xulmbo ertilncoglycol genx ymul~~ rnliv lnkei

nr ~~jemuq rotacne~~ zifqor

ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec

so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr

Mise ~~ntap vemjnr~~ v ~~iuf unir~~ sntev lsvo

Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo

co rkngesonr ln z ~~co delncnar ln~~

rkngesonr ln z delncti

Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul ~~doeci~~

Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²

nlbsaqer ~~v dizitsvirur etu masaqe ln~~

elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo

Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka

Iza cist ramiv ~~drlnu~~

Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹

~~</pre>~~

|en=The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise

~~Line 2 has a PST.UNDONE~~

~~The last word is a VOLUN.FUT.IPFV~~

=~~= Translation ==~~

~~<pre>~~

The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise

Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).

In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,

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But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.

Go, and live the way you will.

~~</pre>~~

|gloss=wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered

~~== Glossing =~~=

and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE

~~<pre>~~

LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming

wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be

LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow

and LOC-and bottom-sky many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE

eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT

LOC village familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming

LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome

~~that~~ LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT

excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV

~~indef.~~ place-beautiful be.3N but ~~indef. storm_to_be~~ be.3N

place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]

~~Nothing~~ grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM ~~thirty~~ years

nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years

and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark ~~dissipate~~.3Pl PST.PFV

and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV

~~Not ?~~ failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ? ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG

not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG

go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV

~~</pre>~~

|notes=¹ A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.

² Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.

}}

(Sorry, the formatting needs a bit more fine-tuning.)

== Notes ==

* Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].

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-{{Ambox
+{{Hwnic text
-|text=This is a segment of my reflections mapped onto the conlang; ''e'' "for" is used in titles of non-essays, as opposed to ''ti'' "on" which is used in titles of essays, and both mean "about".
+|title=E Ri b Cellax
-Numbered superscripts are relevant to the intended meaning of the text and notes in the notes section are relevant to grammar.
+|hwnic=Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
-|type=notice
+Qs nerl xulmbohertilncoglycol genxymul rnliv lnkei
-|image=<!--Hwnic text.png-->
+nr jemuqrotacne zifqor
-}}
-A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him. I don't really know how to write, but I feel I should save these unique emotions somewhere.
-''Todo: complete glossing; IPA symbols; add a isloxvn image; add a flexbox fmtt;''
-== Hwnic ==
-<pre>
-Cqor lsva doebu nr mlcotcne zutqor
-Qs nerl xulmbo ertilncoglycol genx ymul rnliv lnkei
-nr jemuq rotacne zifqor
 ni ril nr xulcib blqu nrir getec
 so ni xornq geq ge xulnorko fnind lobatr
-Mise ntap vemjnr v iuf unir sntev lsvo
+Mise ntapvemjnr v iufunir sntev lsvo
-co rkngesonr ln z co delncnar ln
+rkngesonr ln z delncti
-Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci
+Zand mactaqn nr nru mlsncis rt xoqukul doeci²
-nlbsaqer v dizitsvirur etu masaqe ln
+elo nlbsaqer dizvirur xegn defuirn lsvo
 Zo vu ti izosbru cqozeigka zazo vu ti rxeju myzygka
-Iza cist ramiv drlnu
+Iza cist ramiv kylnu¹
-</pre>
+|en=The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
-Line 2 has a PST.UNDONE
-The last word is a VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
-== Translation ==
-<pre>
-The chilly wind picks up where it was once paradise
 Under the polyurethane sky and replacement sunlight where you had fallen in love (but is no more).
 In villages once familiar now unwelcoming,
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 But people will not condemn you for your failure, nor dismiss you for your ineptitude.
 Go, and live the way you will.
-</pre>
+|gloss=wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be altered
-== Glossing ==
+and LOC-and bottom-sky-many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight-artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
-<pre>
+LOC village-familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
-wind_blow.3Sg PRES.PFV cold LOC paradise-used_to_be
+LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome boundless LOC.this glow
-and LOC-and bottom-sky many-linear_chain-isocyanate-glycol sunlight artificial love.2Sg PST.UNDONE
+eqv. LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
-LOC village familiar-used_to_be unwelcoming
-LOCV tiny LOC bottom-dome
-that LOCV pattern morphing_spectacle MOT top-world trace.3N PRES.CONT
 excl. terrain-sunlit appos. barrens-concrete walk.2Sg PST.PFV
-indef. place-beautiful be.3N but indef. storm_to_be be.3N
+place-beautiful be.3N but storm-to_be [be.3N]
-Nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM thirty years
+nothing grow.3I LOC soil poison-laden TEM twenty years
-and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark dissipate.3Pl PST.PFV
+and passion-burning anger_formless creative_spark be_absent.3Pl PST.PFV
-Not ? failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ? ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
+not ACC.you REL failure condemn.1Sg.NEG nor ACC.you REL ineptitude mock.1Sg.NEG
 go.OPT then live.2Sg VOLUN.FUT.IPFV
-</pre>
+|notes=¹ A thing written for someone whom I've met in a high school chemistry class but lost contact afterwards, here referred to as "Ri". That evening he poured forth his emotions in the empty hallway. The last two lines are what I should have said to him.
+² Refers to the time when Ri will graduate from high school.
+}}
+(Sorry, the formatting needs a bit more fine-tuning.)
+== Notes ==
+* Connected speech complicates the pronunciation here: ''defuirn lsvo'' is [dɛ́fʏ̂nˑɺəɫzʋɔ̆], ''cqozeigka'' is [çqó̞zɛɨ̯ʕ̯xâ], ''xornq geq ge'' is [xó̞ɾɤ̃ʔgɤ́ɴqɤ] where standalone ''ge'' is [ŋə̃].